My family
Dear friend
My name is zhang weina.Im 12 years old.
My father is 36 years old.He very likewatch TV.Hes QQ number is 1325315455.My father have telephone. Hes telephone number is 15139633837.
My mother is 35 years old. She like read books. She dont like wanch TV. My mother have a QQ number. Its 1125837529.Shes telephone number is 13473453815.
My brother is 8 years old. He very play computer game.but He dislike read books.Hes QQnumber is 2505989371. He dont have telephone number. but He have a E mail。
I like play computer. but father dont like it.I often go to movies with my friend and play sports.
This is my family, I very love it!
My family
Dear friend
My name is zhang weina.Im 12 years old.
My father is 36 years old.He very likewatch TV.Hes QQ number is 1325315455.My father have telephone. Hes telephone number is 15139633837.
My mother is 35 years old. She like read books. She dont like wanch TV. My mother have a QQ number. Its 1125837529.Shes telephone number is 13473453815.
My brother is 8 years old. He very play computer game.but He dislike read books.Hes QQnumber is 2505989371. He dont have telephone number. but He have a E mail。
I like play computer. but father dont like it.I often go to movies with my friend and play sports.
This is my family, I very love it!
小同学，你真了不起，英语作文写得这么好。通过你的作文，我们了解了你的家庭。你真是个幸福的孩子。你在文章介绍了爸爸、妈妈、哥哥还有你的的有关情况，真详细。但是老师认为，你还可以介绍一下他们的突出性格会更好。祝你写作进步！
