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I will do my best

作者: wuming2011       年级: 初中二年级       作文类型: 随 笔       发布日期: 2012-01-07 10:39:20

on this term ,we were crying and laughing together .I thought we all did my best to study.dont mind the result.because we were fighting. we shared the happiness and hurt.I think I will do my best on next term.just do what should i do ,and do my best to do it will.I believe i will be a great leader in the future.


cheer me up and cheer me on

I will do my best

批改教师: 徐睿老师       时间:2012-01-09 17:06:57

on this term ,we were crying and laughing together .I thought we all did my best to study.dont mind the result.because we were fighting. we shared the happiness and hurt.I think I will do my best on next term.just do what should i do ,and do my best to do it will.I believe i will be a great leader in the future.


cheer me up and cheer me on


教师评语:

你写到了自己要做的最好,并且表达了自己的决心,很有志气。可是老师以为,你应该详细的写一下,你像如何做才能做得最好的。缺乏具体的做法。老师相信,只要你努力,你简直,你一定会做到:“I will do my best”,祝你写作进步,请您下次提供中文的作文,谢谢。

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