My family photo
This is a photo of my family.These are my grandparents.My mother my father myuncle and my aunt are behind my grandparent.my parent are on the left,my uncle and my aunt are on the right.my cousins are on both sides am I in the midst of them.
We are so happy.

My family photo
This is a photo of my family.These are my grandparents.My mother my father myuncle and my aunt are behind my grandparent.my parent are on the left,my uncle and my aunt are on the right.my cousins are on both sides am I in the midst of them.
We are so happy.
小同学,你的作文如果翻译成中文是这样的:(对不起,我们只批改中文作文,你可以作为参考,好吗?)
这是我的家庭相册。这里有我的祖父母,(他们虽然岁数大了,但是很健康。)我的妈妈,我的爸爸,(瞧,他们多年轻!)我的叔叔和我的婶婶在的我祖父母后面,(他们可是孝顺的夫妻呢!)。我的父母亲在左边,我的叔叔婶婶在右边,我的堂兄弟在我们中间。(他笑得多可爱!)我们很幸福。
小同学,这是在介绍一幅家庭照,你很好的使用了方位词,介绍的真清楚,而且是用英语写的,真棒。我觉得,如果用汉语写,因为是介绍图片,所以还应该写一下人物的主要表情,你说对吗?祝你写作进步!