my friend
作者：
sunyimeng 年级：
小学五年级 作文类型：
记叙文 发布日期：
2011-04-06 18:25:22
i have a friend. she has big eyes and ear.she has a small nose. she has long hairs. she‘s tsll and thin he likes playing the violin on sunday. i like her very much.
My Friend
批改教师：
余老师
时间：2011-04-08 15:30:11
i I(应该改为 I )have a friend. sheShe(应该改为 She )has big eyes and earears(应该改为 ears). sheShe(应该改为 She )has a small nose.sheShe(应该改为 She )has long hairshair(应该改为hair) .sheShe(应该改为 She ) 's tsll tall(应该是 tall )and thin .heShe(应该改为 She )likes playing the violin on sunday . i I(应该改为 I )like her very much.
教师评语：
这篇英语作文，标题首字母及句子开头首字母要大写，单词和单词之间要空开，否则会引起误解。个别名称的单复数及标点符号也要注意，希望继续努力！
