My Village
作者:
qybf 年级:
小学五年级 作文类型:
记叙文 发布日期:
2009-02-08 20:52:47
I have a nice village.There is a forest and many mountains.There is a river near the path.You can see many fish in it.There aye many houses in my village.I like my village very much.

My Village
批改教师:
孙老师
时间:2009-02-13 14:31:02
I have a nice village.There is a forest and many mountains.There is a river near the path.You can see many fish in it.There aye many houses in my village.I like my village very much.
我有一个好的村庄。有许多森林和山。在道路附近有小河。您能看到许多鱼在里面。那里有许多房子在我的村庄。我非常喜欢我的村庄。
教师评语:
你的英语学的很好,写的内容也很好,希望你多加练习,再接再厉.