SpingFestival
Dear Miss Li :
I had the SpingFestival with my grandparents in the country. We were very excited. On the eve of the Chinese new year . is twelve o’clock . We ate Jiaozi at home and set off the fireworks to welcome the new year . We’re very happy. Early the next morning , we wear new clothes , we will go to visit our
relatives and friends . we will say 〝happy SpingFestival! 〞 We had
a wonderful day.
Yang Shaohan

SpingFestival
Dear Miss Li :
I had the SpingFestival with my grandparents in the country. We were very excited. On the eve of the Chinese new year . is twelve o’clock . We ate Jiaozi at home and set off the fireworks to welcome the new year . We’re very happy. Early the next morning , we wear new clothes , we will go to visit our
relatives and friends . we will say 〝happy SpingFestival! 〞 We had
a wonderful day.
Yang Shaohan
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