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SpingFestival

作者: yangshaohan       年级: 小学五年级       作文类型: 其 他       发布日期: 2014-01-19 09:34:24

Dear Miss Li :




I had the SpingFestival with my grandparents in the country. We were very excited. On the eve of the Chinese new year . is twelve o’clock . We ate Jiaozi at home and set off the fireworks to welcome the new year . We’re very happy. Early the next morning , we wear new clothes , we will go to visit our


relatives and friends . we will say 〝happy SpingFestival! 〞 We had


a wonderful day.


Yang Shaohan


SpingFestival

批改教师: 闻老师       时间:2014-01-19 10:06:50

Dear Miss Li :




I had the SpingFestival with my grandparents in the country. We were very excited. On the eve of the Chinese new year . is twelve o’clock . We ate Jiaozi at home and set off the fireworks to welcome the new year . We’re very happy. Early the next morning , we wear new clothes , we will go to visit our


relatives and friends . we will say 〝happy SpingFestival! 〞 We had


a wonderful day.


Yang Shaohan


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