my house
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643244116 年级：
小学六年级 作文类型：
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2014-01-12 12:57:11
Look this is my house.This is living room.There is couch TV in my living.There is a picture above my couch.In my room,Has a blue bed and a blue closet.The dask is from my bed.The chair is under the dask.Stove、refrigerator is in the kitchen.In my mother and father s room,has a bed,a closet,a dreeser.I lovemy house.
my house
批改教师：
孙老师
时间：2014-01-12 16:02:33
Look this is my house.This is living room.There is couch TV in my living.There is a picture above my couch.
In my room,Has a blue bed and a blue closet.The dask is from my bed.The chair is under the dask.
Stove、refrigerator is in the kitchen.
In my mother and father s room,has a bed,a closet,a dreeser（dresser, 梳妆台）
I lovemy house.
教师评语：
同学你好，这篇短文介绍了“我”的家及家里的摆设，从客厅、卧室、厨房，爸爸妈妈卧室的摆设，床、衣柜等。表达了对家的喜爱。不错的一篇短文。希望写中文作文。祝你不断进步！
