My classroom
作者：
zsz1858 年级：
初中一年级 作文类型：
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2013-09-15 12:35:26
My classroom
Holl, my name is Wang Lin. My classroom have thrity - eight classmates. My classroom have fourteen gril classmates. My classroom have twenty - four boy classroomates. But we have good teacher. My classroom is very beautiful. My classroom is very happy.
My classroom
批改教师：
徐睿老师
时间：2013-09-15 14:59:11
My classroom
Holl, my name is Wang Lin. My classroom have thrity - eight classmates. My classroom have fourteen gril classmates. My classroom have twenty - four boy classroomates. But we have good teacher. My classroom is very beautiful. My classroom is very happy.
教师评语：
同学，你的英语作文很丰富，交代了有关你班的情况，很细致。老师建议，如果你能写成汉语作文效果就更好了，祝你进步。
